Make it make sense

Greenflagenjoyer May 5, 2024 2:27 pm

There's just too many things...

Is there a reason why they didn't leave the orphanage more or less together or a similar time. Mido left and he spent the whole day doing god knows what.... Leaving a vunerable kid alone the whole day.

It's just too convenient.

If he's worried what the man might do to Mido if he adopts him because he's omega, he should've been very aware of the same risk applying outside the orphanage if he left him alone there to way for many hours with nowhere to go.

Again. It doesn't make sense. MC was obviously aware of the dangers if he was worried about the adoption.

None of this is excusing Mido's abuse, but this story is a shitshow of misunderstanding and characters jumping to conclusion. Initially, I thought it was a problem of the writing with Mido... but now it's every character. The writing isn't very strong here. All of the plot is too convenient and doesn't make sense if anyone there was thinking for 2 seconds.

Please don't forget the younger blonde is lying, gaslighting him and enabling Mido's abuse. He's better than Mido, sure... But the bar is litteraly on the floor.

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