ATE UP!! LOUDER FOR THE HOES THAT DISLIKED UR COMMENT!!
Youre so real for this, worst part is that they met her when they were 11 I think? Then she would be 4 which they didn't even have romantic feelings for her(which I hope they don't) and only have seen her as a sister,
The 2nd one I so so agree,,,if those were 2 ugly strangers literally people who are obsessing over that would be FURIOUS.
Everytime at all they ruin it so bad,and you can tell the author likes it and (probably) fantasize about it
Honestly, it probably is a fantasy. I wouldn't be surprised if it's a self-insert and the author/artist is fantasizing over their older siblings' friends lol
I think it's all right story, but there are a few major things that bother me about this. I'm in a ranting mood today sorry.
They've been chasing her for years, but there's a 6 year difference. Like you don't think about it when you're an adult, but like that's too big a difference especially since she's only been an adult for a couple of years. I may have missed how long she knew them, but it was at least before she graduated because he just got back from military service which is usually 2 years. The author should have made the age gap closer by maybe 2 to 3 years but made it creepy that they were literally chasing after a child while an adult in the past.
They also got her drunk and stripped her naked and were naked themselves. Insinuating they were going to rape her cause she mentioned a threesome with "strangers" on the internet. This could have been told differently. There was no conversation about hooking up before stripping her. This could have been told differently.
They also had no prep anal which is honestly the worst. As someone who's experienced that it's fucking awful. It is not that easy to put it in and dry anal hurts and is not pleasurable, especially your first time.