it could have been better

g0thg0re666 May 4, 2024 8:34 pm

i feel like it started falling apart around chapter 17-18, i could have seen it going in a diffeent direction but it didn't. I feel like the most logical decision after killing the dude who tried to rape her would be to go to the police and report what had happend and how he was the person who killed those other people she encountered in highschool. it kinda threw me for a loop when they added in the youtuber boyfriend and it was wayyy over the top for the rich dude to basically put a hit out on them and create another conflict onto of the already presented one. I understand that the whole story was suposed to be showing how they both struggle and arnt the people they portray themselves to be, but I think there were also a lot of plot holes and questions left unanswered. what happend to her in the last chapter?? she looked like she was going to kill herself but chose to just throw her phone in the ocean instead. its also insinuated that she visits him in jail at some point with him calling her a bitch, but it was only a single panel so it's unclear to me if she really did visit him or not. also the fact that siblings were present in both mc's lives but were just mentioned in passing. I feel like a lot of things just had to be assumed with this like the fact that riko died, and that the girl presumably moved away to where male mc mentioned wanting to go. I don't know I was left wanting a lot more than what was given. I'd give it a 3.5

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