Hmm.. It's good but I think it's missing something, like I don't feel the spark at all but it's pretty good
It lacks development and actual dialogue between mc and ml, there was little to none between their meeting and confession, I was honestly surprised at how lackluster and rushed it is considering the first chapter was well written imo
Hmm.. It's good but I think it's missing something, like I don't feel the spark at all but it's pretty good