╥﹏╥ why are you looking to connect with characters in a mafia themed story....do you relate to mafia?!
Are u kidding me? No matter where a story is placed in the characters can be written well or written like shit. This one is clearly not for those who don't want to simply read brain rot mafia stories. And I commented on that. Even so, the story even for brain rot it's kind of shit cuz in my opinion the characters aren't good looking since the anatomy of them makes zero sense. They are TOO BIG. The artist in a lot of panels have chosen horrible perspective for them. They tend to look abnormal and BAD to the eye. Once in a while I want to take my comments seriously and not just type "big titties, ass plot", let me be ☹☹
╮(￣▽￣)╭ I'm just letting you know the reality of it. Its a mafia themed story. You know the mafia right? It ain't going to be pretty.
I didn't refute you on the art btw just how you said characters aren't relatable. So you don't need to rant about how the art work doesn't suit your tastes.
I don't mind the brutality, I'm just saying the characters are not written well. Why? Because they are putten in situations which first off don't add up with each other and second of all cuz most of the dialoge is ass. Why are u acting like porn can't be written well. This is one of the most disappointing mafia stories I've read. Like that's it
the setting of a story does not determine if the characters are relatable or not.
If the characters are well written and complex like real humans are- then they can be relatable, you can connect with them, you can emphasize with them, you can understand them.
these characters are not relatable because they are written like shit, not because its a mafia themed story lol
Omg thank you, you are an angel
I wouldn't go so FAR as to tell anyone not to read it just cuz of an opinion I would have. I mean that should be someone's choice if they wanna read this and see if they'd like to continue. Idk, you sounded very dramatic to me, I'm not attacking you so don't the wrong idea but that's how I feel.
It's alr, I mean if u wanna read it that's fine but some people(me as well) are more assertive with their speach and in all honestly I love being dramatic. So yeah lol
Guys don't read, plot doesn't really make sense. There's rape even thought it click baited us that it wouldn't. The characters ain't even that pretty, the body propositions are actually insane. And in general not well written at all. You're unable to connect with the characters. Etc etc. Dropped