Until Chapter 53

natur.vero May 3, 2024 4:43 pm

I stop now.. I really tried to adapt to the writing and everything else too. Give it many chances.. But I can't there are so many points missing and the conversations are just weird. It feels as if they took many parts out and combined them into one story. We are jumping to one scene to the other. Everything is so weird. The romance is off, the storytelling and no climax at all.
I wish for the others that you have fun reading it, not like the way I did.

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