their thoughts just make no sense

levipleasecallmeback April 30, 2024 9:11 pm

so yeongwon was in extreme pain and traumatized by how hurtful the sex was. but the morning after he found it okay because it was done by his crush?? then seo-in knows how difficult mc’s life was because of his dad, but still manipulated/sexually abused him when he knows yeongwon only left to escape his fathers abuse???

was this story written by ai… it took the most shallow parts of a revenge plot with stereotypical yaoi storylines. then made it an mc victim harem where he, of course, ends up with man who abuses him the worst

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    Greenflagenjoyer April 30, 2024 10:29 pm

    Every chapters... Every characters... None of it make sense.

    The writting went down fast. It's not deep. It's not complex. The writting is just... Not there.

    There's also a few point where the art isn't there either. Just this one chapter, In one panel it looked like there was blood... But never in the other panels. There was also one panel where the face was hidden behind the shoulder where it should've been the other way around.