Can you guys tell me if this start is any good?

I'll make sure to check it out once I get the time :)

Ill Check it out when i have free time (づ￣ ³￣)づ

I read the first two chapters and it's a really good story (๑•ㅂ•)و✧
I think I got confused for a sec there cuz were there two girls Maria and Sabrina or just one?? Maybe I'm sleepy lol
Oh and the part before his father called got me confused as well by I think it's because I'm not that bright
I liked it an am following it :)

Oh gosh you are totally right I fixed it , it's supposed to be sabrina I fixed it now omg! and thank you very very much! I'll keep writing and I hope you keep writing feedback on what you like to see, or what you didn't like or did like, and if there is something I need to change , again really thank you (I seriously have a big smile on my face you made my day!)

Ahaha no probs~ it's just that I haven't had time to read lately (I'm becoming lazier xD)
Oh, you're doing a wonderful job and if I feel like saying something I'll be in the comments other wise if I don't post anything, rest assured that I liked it very much and am at loss for words :)
Keep up the hard work and I hope you gets lots of readers who love your works :)
Have a lovely day (≧∀≦)