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no cuz i totally agree. but i also feel like they’re doing too much with kishiar. idk if that’s just me or wtv and ik he’s depicted as like.. a big beast from yuders pov and to be smiling all the time but the way he’s drawn looks like he’s condescendingly smiling or that he’s sex crazed which to my memory just doesn’t match right idk
Sorry as a novel reader I'm not really impressed with how they handled the flashback it felt very out of place and jarring. I think just the flashback hinting at their previous relationship indirectly would have been better. It would have set the mood/atmosphere better instead of flat out sex.
Considering the novel is really careful and good at creating atmosphere and gradually developing their relationship, I guess maybe im being too nitpicky.