Make it mutual toxicity instead

As someone who pierces myself I kept getting triggered with him licking a fresh piercing and touching it after touching his dick

Anyway I don't think this is well done, I read it because I did want something toxic, so I'm not even complaining about that, but why is the uke so??? Idk accepting? Like "oh I asked for a piercing and now I'm getting jerked off, uh oh I'm in love" at no point does he gain a backbone and I hate that with these yaois, make it toxic and make him get mad, make him pierce him back and get possessive too, idk had potential, but it's just a quick story so whatever