I don’t know how to explain it, but the art is so flat (bro looks photoshopped on top of...

Roxy April 28, 2024 5:53 am

I don’t know how to explain it, but the art is so flat (bro looks photoshopped on top of the bed he was laying on. It doesn’t look like a head is laying on the pillow), and the common sense is nonexistence. I do not wish well for the main character (I forgot his name). How could you say you have feelings for someone after he killed your brother?

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    mary April 28, 2024 10:15 am

    For real, the mc doesn’t even feel like a real person. All the characters are so shallow and one dimensional. The violence has no emotional weight behind it because the character development and relationships are so shallow. It just feels like the author wanted to write a toxic BL story without creating complex character, and just exposition dumping their backstories

    And as for the art, it’s okay, but sometimes their bodies look all distorted. And when their mouths are open (like they’re supposed to be talking I think?) they just look like fish. and imo the ML just looks like a freak, and tattoo dude looks like a pasty pale creep. At least the MC looks fine, too bad he has lacks brain cells