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It's a poorly written story full of cliches lol
Well thats a more to the point why of putting it
*way (I need to proofread)
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It's a poorly written story full of cliches lol
Well thats a more to the point why of putting it
*way (I need to proofread)
This story is so abrupt and dramatic what's with the high school flashbacks that don't actually have any sort of impact on the story or add anything? Why does she have like no reaction to the bet? Why does he just get obsessed with her all of a sudden and they're like desperately in "love" with each other when nothing's happened? They don't really know each other at all everything's a bit rushed.