Small vord vomit abt authors note

SpectreSouls April 23, 2024 5:22 pm

"Slower the burn the sweeter the redemption" pookie you slow burned Alex's redemption last webcomic and it was rlly mid, praying they've learned from Alex's arc and make JKs redemption worth it. It would be so satisfying to see him actually learn and grow as a person (slow burn style instead of fast like Alex's was) and actually fight to be better so he's somone worth Dan's forgivness

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    Lanlala April 23, 2024 5:39 pm

    I mean, I don't understand the slow burn she's talking about. If she declared that she is in the middle of the work and the first part was 50chs slug sponge bob square pants = didn't move and full of holes.
    So the second season will be very tight, giving a feeling of rush, for everything she has to do for the story to end reasonably. ┑( ̄Д  ̄)┍

    amosprinz April 23, 2024 6:24 pm

    100% agree, it was less slow burn and more agonised pining with hints of sad shots of them thinking about the other — i hope with jinx it’s much more angst driven in that sense where JK actually learns how to grow as a person (highly doubt it, he’s a bitch astaghfirullah)

    SpectreSouls April 24, 2024 2:45 pm
    I mean, I don't understand the slow burn she's talking about. If she declared that she is in the middle of the work and the first part was 50chs slug sponge bob square pants = didn't move and full of holes.So t... Lanlala

    Can't be surprised, that's the exact formula BJ Alex followed. I hate comparing her works but you can definetly notice her weaknesses in writing just from her story formula