The story is almost there but lacking.

NaTori April 22, 2024 2:01 pm

The amount of secondhand embarrassment while reading this was astounding. The ML is a dick through and through. You would think after 30 chapters, there’d be some character development where he would treat her like someone who is precious to him whether that’s as a future partner or his first female friend that he doesn’t want to lose. I know there’s this whole, “people pick on their crushes” thing. Usually, I don’t mind this trope but it could’ve been done better. I love a nice tsundere story but it’s just not giving. There is something seriously wrong with a story if we cannot see the characters CLEARLY grow.

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