Something's off

turkmilliyetcisi April 21, 2024 12:49 pm

The storywriting was very bad and i think it's because the sex was the main topic idk. Could've been better

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    Chibi April 23, 2024 3:38 am

    Yeah, I agree, I mean suicide thoughts don't just disappear... He wanted to die because he had nothing in life that made sense so what, now his life makes sense because he's having sex with a dominant alpha? It really could have been so much better

    turkmilliyetcisi April 23, 2024 8:43 pm
    Yeah, I agree, I mean suicide thoughts don't just disappear... He wanted to die because he had nothing in life that made sense so what, now his life makes sense because he's having sex with a dominant alpha? It... Chibi

    And that alpha...like what are you trying to do when you are threating a person with suicidal thoughts? He would just kill himself. that part really had me laughing