The story is decent enough but the dialogue is sooooo bad… can’t tell whether it’s the translators fault or, more likely, the author doesn’t talk to people enough to understand that some of the sentences these characters are spewing aren’t exactly the kinda thing you say unprompted and you have to give some sort of train of thought for the characters to come off as, well, characters and not shitty npcs
The story is decent enough but the dialogue is sooooo bad… can’t tell whether it’s the translators fault or, more likely, the author doesn’t talk to people enough to understand that some of the sentences these characters are spewing aren’t exactly the kinda thing you say unprompted and you have to give some sort of train of thought for the characters to come off as, well, characters and not shitty npcs