So first I have a question, at what point did Jiskar realize Ray’s real identity? I mean, more like come in term with it? Cause when Ray was imprisoned and tortured Jiskar was all « heh you’re Lenovard (ok i don’t remember the name I tried) ‘s son ». And Ray felt despair cause Jiskar was apparently a man of facts so there was afterall no way for him to believe he got reincarnated. Then, Ray escaped, Christian verbalizes that he has recognized him. Few months pass, Ray and Jiskar meet again and now Jiskar has already accepted that Ray is the reincarnated emperor?! 0-o When did he accept it? Did I read too fast? Cause the moment I love the most with this trope is the meet again/realization part. Where is it? TAT
Aaaaand I think this story has become super messy ever since Ray got his first crystal. Things were already pretty too much dramatic before that, but it was fun to read. But after that moment I found the pace to be quite messy and the storytelling a bit around the place. Too much false conflicts that got resolved without really trying and without tension, be it the political one, monsters one or romantic one. I still enjoy it, but I hope it will get a bit better still TwT
So first I have a question, at what point did Jiskar realize Ray’s real identity? I mean, more like come in term with it? Cause when Ray was imprisoned and tortured Jiskar was all « heh you’re Lenovard (ok i don’t remember the name I tried) ‘s son ». And Ray felt despair cause Jiskar was apparently a man of facts so there was afterall no way for him to believe he got reincarnated.
Then, Ray escaped, Christian verbalizes that he has recognized him. Few months pass, Ray and Jiskar meet again and now Jiskar has already accepted that Ray is the reincarnated emperor?! 0-o When did he accept it? Did I read too fast? Cause the moment I love the most with this trope is the meet again/realization part. Where is it? TAT
Aaaaand I think this story has become super messy ever since Ray got his first crystal. Things were already pretty too much dramatic before that, but it was fun to read. But after that moment I found the pace to be quite messy and the storytelling a bit around the place. Too much false conflicts that got resolved without really trying and without tension, be it the political one, monsters one or romantic one.
I still enjoy it, but I hope it will get a bit better still TwT