Only read if you are starved for officeworker buff virgin uke x seme soft pretty boy experienced pornstar

CuriousGumWad April 9, 2024 2:21 pm

Mostly sex with shallow relationship because wouldn't you believe it they fell in love through sex no conversation nor after care no pillow talk. Porn actor falls in love with the uke because uke is "not like other girls". It's really bland and disappointing as a result because the whole story basically goes "when you get horny for someone it's because you're in love" at least for the uke. As a smut it leaves much to be desired in layout and composition a lot of the sex scenes feel very stiff (probably because artist can't draw buff guys without making them look stiff because "muscles are always hard"). Just wish there was some more BL in this yaoi or maybe more communication during sex or them having literally any other interaction that isn't just fucking or talking about work and/or money. Really think about what we know about our two main leads on the one hand you have famous pornstar turned loyal boyfriend through the magical mindblowing sex with the other guy(totally not a wattpad young girl self insert fanfic) how'd he become a pornstar? Who cares. The other guy gets into debt because talking a coworkers debt so he's kind and responsible but also some martyrdom there, he likes sex, he used to think he could top but now he's a bottom, he has a coworker friend, he lives alone(?) any hobbies?,interests? None huh? Maybe the author forgot to give you one inbetween all those ahego faces.

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