Cute but...

Eve April 6, 2024 11:48 pm

I read a few other comments and they were spot on. The beginning for me was decent and intriguing but typical; art style is quite nice. The comedy points are def the highlights. I like it BUT...

The thing is this is too stereotypical to the point of not giving the two main leads any distinct personalities at all. Yeonwoo supposedly has this trauma and ran away from an obsessed alpha and yet there is almost no hurdle, turmoil or hesitance to sleep with Shin and Shin is your typical rich, powerful, cool guy who's ice cold to everyone else except Yeonwoo. Why is Shin such a dick? Obv, he's generally fine but when you think a little deeper, he's a dick to everybody and has the same powers and privileges as all the other alphas who get their way. He shows kindness to Yeonwoo..ok? Is that supposed to make him treating others like doodoo a good thing? What is this? Kdrama from the early 2000s?

It has potential but I read all the way to the most recent chapter and every god damn time, the author glosses over their meaningful interactions together--lthe actual parts where they communicate and bond; the parts where we as the audience can understand and see the chemistry beyond the pheremones. WTF. The author just tells us in a flashback when it could've been show not tell from Yeonwoo's memory. No wonder the genre says Ecchi.

Responses
    Booty licker April 7, 2024 5:06 am

    Tis is lowkey so deep

    Kyun~ April 12, 2024 1:34 am

    I was about to write a long ass argument essay but thank God I read it till the last paragraph hahhahah

    IF U TIE & LOCK ME UP, SUE ME! April 12, 2024 3:27 am

    I have thought the same, this webtoon could’ve the potential. It started strong, but at start of the arc where MC was kidnapped it just went downhill. The author keeps on repeating words and the transition of the story feels like reading a wattpad story. I stopped reading during the ML and MC was about to get married and getting both family’s approval. The story becomes too cringe for me, just like what you said a morning time k-drama.