I don’t hate this but I really wish she wouldn’t be stubborn to the point of self hatr...

Ohitspinereee April 2, 2024 1:14 am

I don’t hate this but I really wish she wouldn’t be stubborn to the point of self hatred in every chapter. I look forward to seeing her grow and love herself more.

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    Ohitspinereee April 2, 2024 1:23 am

    If you wanted an honest opinion, it’s not too bad. The unnecessary drama can get a little bit tiring sense it’s always just so one sided (since it’s all just her self-sabotaging it can get frustrating for a reader to see no development) if you don’t like cheating then this isn’t for you. He cheats in the beginning but he does stop once they get married. That’s the thing as well the marriage was so rushed if that was the case they should’ve gotten married in the first 3 chapters sense the buildup was a little weird to me not to slow though just a bit awkward, perhaps to reflect on the awkwardness and the one sidedness of each aspect of their relationship at the time. Since they were both moving at the best of their own drum. I feel like the past life stuff was honestly sprung into the plot cuz they author wanted to create a different plot point then they had originally gone with, me personally I don’t mind the reincarnation plot if done correctly, but in this story I didn’t find that necessary. If you wanted something that’s just smut then honestly I would say there’s good scenes but if that’s the Only reason then it’s not smut heavy.