I agree, cause it's the second thing I've read by this author, and they both have a shit ending. With having another character come in and try to steal the ML. Don't get me wrong this ML should have been stolen.
Yep, if there was a filter for trash authors they would be my first name on the list...
Its not that bad. Ending was cute. Yahwi's development was good. This story was good
What development? His 2 chapters of him being sorry and that's it? We don't have the same definition of good development. To me it was hot garbage
Him not being rude, Cold, mean to Jooin anymore. Him finally taking Jooin's feelings seriously instead of just his own. Him finally figuring out how to Love someone. That is very much development
Ok, so like I said, 2 chapters worth of that? Which is absolutely nothing?
He didn't own up to what he did in the past though? That's like saying a person that emotionally and physically abuses their lover gets a pass just because they're nice all of a sudden? Tf?
Development is making Yawhi work for it and actually showing the work through chapters, not through a timeskip. A timeskip is NOT development.
If you go back and count the chapters, the amount of chapters Yawhi has been remotely nice to Yawhi is less then the amount of chapters he's abusing Jooin. Hot garbage is an understatement honestly.
The chapters amount doesn't really matter. As long as he developed and is a good boyfriend for Jooin it's all good
I wasn't talking to you but anyway Jooin accepted his development and that's all that matters. Jooin is the one he hurt and Jooin is the same one who accepted him back and his development
You put everything i thought into words, I'm not gonna even bother replying to them, people have low standards nowadays when it comes to actual character development
Who cares about what Jooin accepts? It just shows how little to no care went into the story when it comes to fleshing out characters and acting have them redeem themselves smh
I guess you also have low standards since you did read this whole story to the end as well. You and me both
This is the most braindead take i have ever seen in my life. I read shit stories all the time, doesn't mean I think the story is amazing. You're so funny. Your frontal lobe will develop one day don't worry.
I know how you feel. When the writing itself is so obviously bad but they just don't know when to put their shipping goggles and accept it for its flaws. Their standards are so low below Hell that they think "learning how to love" someone and not treat them like crap when they're in a relationship is development when it's literally the bare minimum.
Yup, just the average mangago user honestly. They can't handle when someone criticize their favorite story especially when it's legitimate. I have over 2k BLs of read under my belt, my taste changed alot over the years and I can acknowledge that some of what used to be my favorite BLs were mid at best
Love that mindset. You know you've reached BL enlightenment when you can differentiate what bad writing really is and still enjoy the piece of fiction.
That's all yall can say. Throwing insults but like you did read all of the story? If you don't like a story it's easy to drop it. The only " braindead" person is you. Learn to stop reading shit you clearly don't enjoy. Thank you bye
And hopefully one day you can learn how to take negative criticism of something you enjoy instead of blindly licking the creator's feet of whatever they dish out. When you get in a relationship and your significant other abuses you mentally and humiliates you in public, but then he turns around and showers you with niceness as an act for forgiveness, hopefully you can forgive him just like Jooin forgave Yawhi .
I shouldn't need to. I enjoy this story unlike you weirdos who torture yourselves
reading a story you "hate". You wasting your time being negative and continuing a story you hate is flat out embarrassing and childish. Learn to drop a story you don't enjoy. You aren't 5
Nah, to grow up you need to challenge yourself and overcome difficult tasks/situations. Somebody who lives by the mantra of "if you don't like it, drop it" is the exact opposite of that. The best that will come out of such mentality is an entitled and spoiled child as you can see.
Remind me to never read anything the author decides to write after that cuz this thing was a dumpster fire and honestly it was just a lazy and lousy attempt at a love triangle