I also have a problem with it though the character build up has so many weak points like how the character or mc being created awkwardly and how the story progress somehow leads to confusion but i like how it went just the story character is not built well try reading kill the dragon youll see the difference in character build up
I also have a problem with it though the character build up has so many weak points like how the character or mc being created awkwardly and how the story progress somehow leads to confusion but i like how it went just the story character is not built well try reading kill the dragon youll see the difference in character build up (≧∀≦)
i may be the only one saying this, but the mc is so corny man. he reads like a chunni teenager, and that would be fine if he wasn’t 26.. like to me it feels like the author tries to hard to force sentiments and determination. idk if that makes sense