I was hoping there would more more plot. Smut on its own is boring especially when the two characters aren't that likeable. I don't mind the bottom tho he has his cringy moments but the se is cocky in a way I don't like. And in those stories, I always wonder how they manage to hide their mantly figures under women's clothes. You'd need to be the twinkiest twink ever to be able to do that and this guy isn't. He has a big chest and wide shoulders. His voice too. He might not have a very deep voice naturally but still. It never really convinces me. I'm not too invested in this but I want to see two things: seme without the wig on doing it with mc and him being jealous cause mc found someone better.
I was hoping there would more more plot. Smut on its own is boring especially when the two characters aren't that likeable. I don't mind the bottom tho he has his cringy moments but the se is cocky in a way I don't like. And in those stories, I always wonder how they manage to hide their mantly figures under women's clothes. You'd need to be the twinkiest twink ever to be able to do that and this guy isn't. He has a big chest and wide shoulders. His voice too. He might not have a very deep voice naturally but still. It never really convinces me. I'm not too invested in this but I want to see two things: seme without the wig on doing it with mc and him being jealous cause mc found someone better.