"what would you say...if i tell you that i feel lust for you? No, I should take my time approaching her." Bro, you've had 3(???) years to gradually entice her into reciprocating your feelings and you've made approximately 5% of the progress bar. wtf? You should have been on this yesterday. That brings me to another point, the timeline in the story is absolutely horribly conveyed. The brother's glow up is a full on 'wtf' moment because the readers can only be like, 'uh, just how much time has passed for bro to have dazzled tf up?' and 'did i skip a ch or two??'
This story is okay but it makes me mad in that this story has, had, potential. It's cute but something is always lacking to the point that I can't really feel fully satisfied reading this. You have to ignore the plot holes and turn your brain off to enjoy it because, for one, just how did the FL know all the names of the traitors and the house's they were associated with? That's unrealistic af. I don't even remember the breakfast I had yesterday. Maybe I could see if she was the author but she's not, right? Another thing, the past life of the oc is so played over and used only for the convenience of the author. It tells me that the author didn't really have a whole lot of passion for figuring out their characters or world out. Or they are just bad at the whole writing thing. ┑(￣Д ￣)┍ I know I'm harsh but I just wished some in depth thought process went behind this. 7.5/10
Also, for those who are kinda confused about why the ML is a a** to the brother I think I can infer why. The FL is so focused on the brother and highly prioritizes him. ML doesn't like that at all, wanting her attention on him but is unable to achieve that, even though people can definitely differentiate platonic, sibling love vs romantic love and ML is dumb and jealous and can't move his a** fast enough to woo her in a direct manner at all.
PS, for those who dislike the translation here, SAME. Which is why I moved over to bato whose translation of this is light years better. Go there if you want to read this.
Point of progress atm: ch 31
"what would you say...if i tell you that i feel lust for you? No, I should take my time approaching her."
Bro, you've had 3(???) years to gradually entice her into reciprocating your feelings and you've made approximately 5% of the progress bar. wtf? You should have been on this yesterday. That brings me to another point, the timeline in the story is absolutely horribly conveyed. The brother's glow up is a full on 'wtf' moment because the readers can only be like, 'uh, just how much time has passed for bro to have dazzled tf up?' and 'did i skip a ch or two??'
This story is okay but it makes me mad in that this story has, had, potential. It's cute but something is always lacking to the point that I can't really feel fully satisfied reading this. You have to ignore the plot holes and turn your brain off to enjoy it because, for one, just how did the FL know all the names of the traitors and the house's they were associated with? That's unrealistic af. I don't even remember the breakfast I had yesterday. Maybe I could see if she was the author but she's not, right? Another thing, the past life of the oc is so played over and used only for the convenience of the author. It tells me that the author didn't really have a whole lot of passion for figuring out their characters or world out. Or they are just bad at the whole writing thing. ┑(￣Д ￣)┍ I know I'm harsh but I just wished some in depth thought process went behind this. 7.5/10
Also, for those who are kinda confused about why the ML is a a** to the brother I think I can infer why. The FL is so focused on the brother and highly prioritizes him. ML doesn't like that at all, wanting her attention on him but is unable to achieve that, even though people can definitely differentiate platonic, sibling love vs romantic love and ML is dumb and jealous and can't move his a** fast enough to woo her in a direct manner at all.
PS, for those who dislike the translation here, SAME. Which is why I moved over to bato whose translation of this is light years better. Go there if you want to read this.