I’m done.

Gloomydae March 15, 2024 7:51 pm

So Im only in the beginning and the ml said he’d leave the apartment that the mc’s sister is letting him stay in. The mc instead of maybe saying “Hey my bad since you’re already staying with my sister there’s no need to leave” instead he says u can live with me in the apartment that my sister also provided me with that im letting my friend also stay in the extra room. BRO IS A HIGH SCHOOLER and the sister said she doesn’t prey on kids that young let him stay with the sister because he’s in more danger with the fckin mc then where he was before but hey I’m only on chp 3 and the mc already pissing me off with this dumb sh*t

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    CandyApple September 14, 2024 2:30 pm

    That's exactly where I stopped too cuz that was some stupid reasoning and if the first few chapters have that crazy of a dialogue I'm out