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Yeah, the fast and furious pacing is the main reason why the story seems so wonky. It's a decent plot, but the pacing just kills it.
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Yeah, the fast and furious pacing is the main reason why the story seems so wonky. It's a decent plot, but the pacing just kills it.
This is very much paced like a manga. So many things are happening each chapter and theres little to no filler scenes, and sometimes feel overwhelming. But its not that cringey or bad of a plot, its just the direction and pacing thats making it off.