Uh....No

Meru21 March 13, 2024 12:39 pm

This is beyond ridiculous. I love a good psych trope, but this was beyond contradictory and just plain stupid at points. Kohaku is okay with one stalker but not the other. Ten is a pedo and co.pletely obsessed with Kohaku and manipulative. There's zero character depth and development, zero chemistry and the pacing is deplorable. The artwork is the only good thing about this, but I do not recommend this even as a filler.

Responses
    sosa March 20, 2024 9:52 pm

    after reading your comment I’m actually confused on why everybody else is liking it in the comments??

    Meru21 March 20, 2024 11:20 pm
    after reading your comment I’m actually confused on why everybody else is liking it in the comments?? sosa

    Not everyone has the same taste and I'm pretty critical. But u can see someone who just got into manga liking this. Or someone who's young. Like teenage years

    sosa March 23, 2024 12:05 am
    Not everyone has the same taste and I'm pretty critical. But u can see someone who just got into manga liking this. Or someone who's young. Like teenage years Meru21

    ohh gotcha

    JINLOVEMITSUYA March 23, 2024 8:20 am

    why you use logic when reading this ,it's clearly just for entertainment

    sosa March 23, 2024 10:53 am
    why you use logic when reading this ,it's clearly just for entertainment JINLOVEMITSUYA

    is ur definition of entertainment sth that depicts and or glorifies rape and pedophiles?

    Meru21 March 23, 2024 11:09 am

    Hey, like I said, I love a good psych trope. But that doesn't mean the story has to be crap. It should make sense and be at least somewhat believable even if it's fantastical. This was poorly done.

    JINLOVEMITSUYA March 23, 2024 1:09 pm
    is ur definition of entertainment sth that depicts and or glorifies rape and pedophiles? sosa

    IT'S FICTION!!!IF YOU WANT TO READ SERIOUS STORY GO TO SHONEN AI ,GLORIFY WHAT?IF YOU CAN'T ACCEPT THIS DON'T READ YAOI .SHIT HOW MANY RAPIST I NEED TO CURSE?

    JINLOVEMITSUYA March 23, 2024 1:14 pm
    is ur definition of entertainment sth that depicts and or glorifies rape and pedophiles? sosa

    THIS STORY SURE IS SMUT PLOT AND YOU USE LOGIC IN THIS STORY?THE PLOT ALREADY NOT MAKE ANY SENSE ,HE SUDDENLY CAME AND BROKE THE WINDOW TO SAFE HIM. HOW AM I SUPPOSE TO THINK USING REAL LIFE LOGIC HAH??

    Meru21 March 23, 2024 1:53 pm
    IT'S FICTION!!!IF YOU WANT TO READ SERIOUS STORY GO TO SHONEN AI ,GLORIFY WHAT?IF YOU CAN'T ACCEPT THIS DON'T READ YAOI .SHIT HOW MANY RAPIST I NEED TO CURSE? JINLOVEMITSUYA

    Calm down. No need to shout or attack anyone.

    sosa March 23, 2024 3:28 pm
    IT'S FICTION!!!IF YOU WANT TO READ SERIOUS STORY GO TO SHONEN AI ,GLORIFY WHAT?IF YOU CAN'T ACCEPT THIS DON'T READ YAOI .SHIT HOW MANY RAPIST I NEED TO CURSE? JINLOVEMITSUYA

    the amount of typos, no knowledge of any grammar whatsoever tells me exactly what I need to know about you. merely a child. Yes you are right it’s fiction, but fiction also has to have some boundaries. Author here should’ve approached the sensitive subjects responsibly and with sensitivity. however this author didn’t, the author merely glorified and justified it. If you can’t handle the seriousness that a story can have, then you’re absolutely wrong here.

    sosa March 23, 2024 3:30 pm
    THIS STORY SURE IS SMUT PLOT AND YOU USE LOGIC IN THIS STORY?THE PLOT ALREADY NOT MAKE ANY SENSE ,HE SUDDENLY CAME AND BROKE THE WINDOW TO SAFE HIM. HOW AM I SUPPOSE TO THINK USING REAL LIFE LOGIC HAH?? JINLOVEMITSUYA

    you can relax, no one is forcing you not to read it, i was asking you a question, didn’t know it would awaken such a reaction but that’s how guys who read stories like that normally react.

    Myholeisfree March 28, 2024 10:34 pm

    Yall are funny

    JINLOVEMITSUYA March 29, 2024 2:05 am
    Calm down. No need to shout or attack anyone. Meru21

    that's not attack ,he said i glorifies rape and pedophile ,which words did it sound like i glorifies rape and pedo .i only said the story doesn't make any sense

    JINLOVEMITSUYA March 29, 2024 2:10 am
    the amount of typos, no knowledge of any grammar whatsoever tells me exactly what I need to know about you. merely a child. Yes you are right it’s fiction, but fiction also has to have some boundaries. Author... sosa

    now you called me a child, you are so childish talking about grammar stuff .are you here to give lecture to me? so funny. this story doesn't make any sense from the beginning it's the same like the AV . he didn't even resist when seme raped him,did you see that? you think real rape is like that? then you know nothing .

    JINLOVEMITSUYA March 29, 2024 2:16 am
    the amount of typos, no knowledge of any grammar whatsoever tells me exactly what I need to know about you. merely a child. Yes you are right it’s fiction, but fiction also has to have some boundaries. Author... sosa

    of course author glorified rape and pedo ,i didn't said he/she didn't i said why you use logic when reading this kind of story?why you use real life logic when reading this kind story? .everything doesn't make any sense.from the beginning he lost his job. it's AV PLOT, i can't think this as something serious . and my first comments was for meru21 not for you. you are just a troll

    JINLOVEMITSUYA March 29, 2024 2:22 am
    the amount of typos, no knowledge of any grammar whatsoever tells me exactly what I need to know about you. merely a child. Yes you are right it’s fiction, but fiction also has to have some boundaries. Author... sosa

    you don't know how much i hate rapist,how dare you said i glorifies rape and pedo. moron

    Meru21 March 29, 2024 4:09 am

    Guys stop. Don't attack one another just because you don't think the same way or have varying opinions. It's okay not to agree, but it's not okay to get personal about it. Debate, but don't argue, please.

    sosa March 29, 2024 10:24 am
    that's not attack ,he said i glorifies rape and pedophile ,which words did it sound like i glorifies rape and pedo .i only said the story doesn't make any sense JINLOVEMITSUYA

    not once did I say u glorify rape and pedophiles and why would I, it doesn’t make sense?? Obviously Im talking about the author of the manhwa and if you can’t handle it then you shouldn’t be here. Also go learn english goodness

    sosa March 29, 2024 10:26 am
    now you called me a child, you are so childish talking about grammar stuff .are you here to give lecture to me? so funny. this story doesn't make any sense from the beginning it's the same like the AV . he didn... JINLOVEMITSUYA

    Im having a stroke reading that, if u wanna debate on something at least learn how to properly make a sentence. And what would I care about if it makes sense or not? Bottom line is the STORY not YOU glorifies rape and pedophiles

    sosa March 29, 2024 10:37 am
    of course author glorified rape and pedo ,i didn't said he/she didn't i said why you use logic when reading this kind of story?why you use real life logic when reading this kind story? .everything doesn't make ... JINLOVEMITSUYA

    No you didn’t say author didn’t, your dumbass thought that you were the one glorifying rape. And girl you gotta be serious, what kind of question is that, in any fiction we always use real life logic because it can help us understand and process the themes and messages presented in the story. By applying real-life logic, we can critically analyze the narrative, characters, and themes, which can enhance our comprehension and appreciation of the story. for example you read about somebody getting raped, because you unintentionally use real life logic, you don’t like the rapist. Thats it, and if you dont want somebody replying to you then don’t comment?