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You must mean the time skips. I agree that they can be a bit confusing sometimes. The pacing of the story could be better.
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You must mean the time skips. I agree that they can be a bit confusing sometimes. The pacing of the story could be better.
the story is alright, like i can read it but idk if the chapters are misplaced or if the story is actually like that. but it seems really “plotchy” like everything seems super messy like one page doesn’t make sense to next, or it all goes too fast