alright, the humor for this story was funny at first and the plot points interesting - but...

stealthestars March 9, 2024 11:14 pm

alright, the humor for this story was funny at first and the plot points interesting - but at some point (probs around ch130+) everything started to get stale and I got bored. the characters are over the top in terms of personality, one dimensional, have no nuance and are badly written. especially the feng family members. the good characters are uber nice and perfect, the bad characters are uber evil and irredeemable. almost every single character is mega rich and then they marry another mega rich character

one character I did find interesting was feng yuyan(?) (the ml's youngest aunt). she actually had a decent character arc and I really felt for her and the fact that she was so overlooked and disregarded by the people around her

and since the mc and ml got together so early, I ended up getting bored of their relationship tbh but that's probably on me cuz I love drama and don't find pre-established couples that are lovey dovey 24/7 that interesting whoops.

the story just drags and could've been cut down. and currently there is no plot

meanwhile, characters that should get focus - the pink haired tiger tattoo lady for example - get glossed over

rourou is cute and funny...but he's also a giant mary sue. He has everyone falling at his feet over how cute he is, is full of powers, can sense emotions, connect with the dead, see when someone's going to die, find lost spirits (bighead) and will them to come into the world of living (ch.243.5), has a magical dream realm where anything is possible even the dead can go there and be immortal, his father is the feng heir, his other father is the hu heir, he's inheriting everything - it just goes on and on.

also with the incest plot being introduced I feel as though the author is setting up rourou and bighead endgame, I hope I'm wrong but I won't be surprised. i'm dropping this but might come back to check out the comments to see if my prediction ended up being true lmao

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