rant from a returning reader. ignore me

daddy chill March 6, 2024 9:05 pm

let’s face it, jooin was marketed to be the pure hoobae who got to catch the interest of the popular sunbae after spending one night (even if he’s bland, a pillow princess, has pencil dck, and has the uke hole the seme/s go crazy about). who gives a shit about an ONS? at least make jooin memorable to someone like that (e.g alter ego, secret, etc???) cuz if not? this would make yahwi a pervert who preys on their clearly drunk hoobae. it’s a y/n story but BL honestly.

i hate that ridiculous fan theories were used as a bandaid solution for plot holes and what, did the author expect us to eat the cain was a dog in the past thing? couldn’t he be a loyal servant instead?? or yk just use peace-loving korean deities? if the author can’t explain the instant fixation of the 2nd ml then they should’ve gave the two mcs the time to actually establish real connection. jooin wouldve been a much more interesting chara if he was given more depth in both the mls’ issues.

the chasing arc and jooin-cain breakup were soo bad like how? the author completely rewrote yahwi’s cat personality, was he also jooin’s dog in his past life? and why is cain acting like yahwi (acting like jooin’s bf without actual label) at the time hoe what????? also, why must authors always make the ml to be the problem in almost every relationships? jooin clearly held feelings for yahwi but they want to make it look like he tried to salvage his and cain’s failing relationship due to cain leaving and lying (for what and how btw. this would make a whole new argument so i won’t touch on this one anymore lol).

cain’s letter and concluding it with jooin reuniting with his true love is bull. bad choices mean it’s a sl*t era (only if it were shown that way, i’d have no complaints). jooin’s still stuck in his fairytale with his sunbae. cain’s letter made me hold hope for a second there ngl that would’ve redeemed the manhwa. love triangle tropes should have more multidimensional characters and if they can’t do that, then just make simple stories with flat characters. good art would be good enough to read through that.

this story frustrated me sm bec it was one of the first BLs i read. i liked the concept of the polarity between the mls’ personalities (i enjoyed reading their character profiles) but these got watered down as the story progressed. i still pick this up from time to time but yeah now it’s nvm.

Responses
    I swear I was normal March 7, 2024 7:30 pm

    I can't believe there are retards who disliked this comments which is spitting 100% facts

    slut March 7, 2024 8:51 pm

    woah i feel sorry for having this as introduction to the genre lmao