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Omg I came to the comments to say the same thing! I’m going to keep reading because it’s an interesting concept, but the sex scenes in this don’t really feel “sexy” to me, I just feel bad for both of them. It’s feels similar to watching someone go through puberty, I’m like “oh, you poor things!!! ╥﹏╥”
Mmh I feel like I should stop reading it cause it hurts too much. The poor guy is only a teenager, and he has no idea what’s happening to him. His whole body is changing, not only he’s suffering of body modification but he’s also gonna end up pregnant ??? In the first place, it must be terrifying for a teenager to have an unwanted pregnancy but he’s also a guy (a “cis” one) and he’s gonna be pregnant ??? In a world (cis) men cannot be pregnant ???? Can you imagine the trauma ?????? There’s no way the author can convince me it’s gonna be a happy ending. Even if he’s « happy » with his alpha and their kid at the end of the story, there’s NO WAY i would be satisfied. This must be the most traumatizing shit ever. Also, the whole world might probably know about it eventually. So the poor kid will be talked about by everyone as if he was the strangest creature ever. And even if he stays anonymous, he’ll still have the most traumatizing experience ever, and he will probably be the one to think of himself as the strangest creature (and it would be legitimate as fuck). And he’s ONLY A KID. Also, he’s literally rotting in a storage. He’s waiting hours and hours, in so much body fluids… not only his own but also the MC’s…. And it has been mixing all together… marinating days and night… even inside his own body…. And he’s not even showering… not even once… and does he even go to the toilet at all ??? I know it’s just fiction, but I can’t not think about all that……
So all he has been doing for days and nights, is waiting ALL ALONE in the worst conditions ever, and fucking with the MC. Then he’s waiting again and fucking again and waiting and fucking etc etc. AND NOTHING ELSE. FOR DAYS AND NIGHTS. AND WITHOUT CLEANING HIMSELF, NOT EVEN ONCE. Every time I see the MC in his own room, or in class, I just think about the dude who’s suffering all alone in the storage……. He just fucks him, leaves him, and then goes back to his everyday life…And even if he gives him food and all, he could also help him clean up a bit… even with just a tissue or something… ALSO, he could lie to his parents just like the poor kid is doing just so he could spend the nights with him……..
I know that it’s just a fiction, and I’m taking it too seriously but it’s too much for me, it literally feels like I’m reading a horror story but it’s not even supposed to be a horror story… like bruh