lmao most of the people are blaming the author for the story having r@pe when they clearly...

OMG RIGHTT? Like why those idiots keep coming back here Are they hoping the story will change to flowery wholesome greeflags webtoon? And when it doesn't they're throwing tantrum like a bunch of kids

i feel like this is obvious at this point. I shouldn't even have to say this like normal people who doesn't like this kind of troupes would have already dropped this series by now. I feel like the 60+ chapters already made it clear where this story is going right? i mean it is very clear in the first chapters that this is not going to be a lighthearted story. Criticism is okay because that how a story improves, but you have to understand the genre of the story before you critize it for example your reading a story about a social psychopath and you want the story to have fluff and rainbows? like bitch make it make sense okayy? criticism should elevate the elements of the story not change it into a different genre entirely. Also you are free to feel frustrated but picking on the author and insulting their work and them is just under the belt, in the first place we are not contributing to them in anyway since we are reading in a illegal platform so we don't have any right to say disrespectful things to them.

Right? Right?? They can CHOOSE which webtoons they like and read it. After 60++ chapters, they're still here and still throwing insults means they're just a bunch of hypocrites showing their idiocity. And yes, they're throwing insult to the author is just showing another level of ignorance

They haven't even resolved the Almuten thingy so the violent behavior that comes with replenishing their powers or life or something to prevent themselves from becoming the enemy is still in the plot. It's shit that the author barely awards the mc some peace or the author adapting this novel rushing through the scenes but given the situation/premise, this chapter is expected.

im not gonna contradict what you said because you do have a point, still it could be worded politely. Instead of using vulgar words, use sentences that will atleast look nice or pleasing to the eyes. Sadly people don't know the word decency and would jump straight into using insulting words. Also our comment is about people insulting the author, and not giving them an ounce of respect they deserve.

i mean we can't do anything about that. It's their choice but still it is so frustrating to see nothing in the comment section but insults to the author, I'd be happy to read it if it is Constructive criticism but mostof the comments are just shitting on the author for not following what they want, and i think that is how kids act, when they don't get their favorite candy.

literally nobody said they wanted this to be light hearted lmfao dont just make shit up. stories can be dark and psychological without a constant string of gratuitous rape chapters. it’s bad writing. please use your critical thinking skills.

First off, English is not my first language. Second, my comment is referring to the OP, not including yours. I haven't even read yours. I am basically giving my 2 cents why I agree people should not expect anything wholesome when the main issue of the story has not been addressed resolved yet.

Lastly, not sure if the word conceited is the right term, ironic or hypocritical that you are calling me off for using the word SHIT. Decency or are you just prude? I am not trying to please or impress anyone. I am describing what the situation is and it is SHIT.

Idk how this was written in the novel but the adaptation is just messy. This threesome rape had so much potential to have suspense in it if it was done properly last chapter or two before this one. It feels like the author/illustrator/editor are held at gun point to adapt novel as fast as they can and just get to the sex scenes.

Really true about the webtoon's pace. it's just a mess. this scene didn't come immediately after the chapters with taein, the background almuten plot was there for a while and only after that came this scene. I don't understand why they shuffled the plotpoints like???? it's also unnecessary

if they would have at least focused on anything other than the sex itself in the art it would already be so much better. but the way it’s drawn is even more reason to believe it’s just there as fetish porn.

I agree. The sex scenes should be earned, whether it's violent or romantic, it has to be earned and make sense. I've had this problem since the beginning and the only reason why I'm still reading is because I am actually interested how almuten is going to be destroyed. The most annoying the sex scene was the romantic one with the ML. It just came out of nowhere. It seemed like there was no skipped chapter, it's just how they adapted it.

Maybe the novel is just as bad or this adaptation is butchering the novel. Idk anymore.

first off im not calling you off, im calling others off if you read other comments below this. I hope you understand my point, im saying they should use polite words atleast when trying to speak words about the author. I just agreed with you that what you said is my opinion too. English is also not my first language my response is only based on my understanding of your opinion.

that is part of the story you have to accept, also if it's bad writing you can say it in a way where you don't have to insult others opinions. We can all be civil when trying to debate and not put others down when they have a different opinion than you. Also we are not making shit up that is our opinion and you should learn that not everyone sees it the same as you, if you don't agree with us then you can argue in a civil way okay? you don't sound critical at all you just sound rude.

Then my bad, ig. I still honestly have not read your replies.
Also, there are two authors, the novel (original) author and adaptation author. If anyone has a brain, they should be criticizing the adaptation author, unless they have read the novel and the source material is just as worse.

did you not understand anything i said?? lol and when was i not civil? and who tf is we?? and how is what i said not critical did you even read it? i did not insult anybody else’s opinion so i’m not sure what your problem is? i said you’re making shit up bc nobody is saying they expected this to be a light hearted story. try reading my comment again but slower.

i did read also i said we because as you see above me and another commenter are agreeing on a topic. And that topic is what you commented to saying that no one said no one in this story expected it to be lighthearted, when in fact there is you are generalizing everyone and saying that no one expected that when it is very clear that many does. Also saying that you don't insult but say "we are making shit up" when it is clearly visible that we are not making things up and the comment is just based on what people said below. Saying things things "why does this series have r@pe and other psychological things involved". When they should clearly know that this is not a wholesome story, do in the 60+ chapters not make it clear that this story is not going to do what they want? and it will keep going worst from now on.

Also don't try to say the making shit up thing again because i can clearly screenshot all of the comments that were trying to change the genre of the story. A constructive criticism should make a story better but not change it entirely. The best example could be "why is the story jumping on another issue when the other one has not finished yet." This counts as a constructive criticism. But saying " Why this has r@pe and red flag shit, the author is shit and nuts for putting continuous psychological scenes". This doesn't count as constructive criticism because you are not trying to give a proper feedback, you just want to complain for the sake of complaining. If you want other things to a story then find a genre that has that trait and suits your tastes. This was what i was trying to say. As i said constructive criticism is always welcome, but insulting someones hard work isn't.

LMFAO i have given PLENTY of constructive criticism in the comments, not that anybody is owed it! and saying you’re making shit up is not an insult LOL. people saying “why does this have rape in it” (which i did see) does not mean they expect or want this story to be wholesome lol. gratuitous rape that adds absolutely nothing to the story but fetish porn is not what makes it psychological!! psychological stories may have rape in them but it is not a psychological trait!! people can complain when this shit is thrown in for nothing. it’s BAD WRITING. you can screenshot all you want idc but i did not see anybody expecting this to be lighthearted. and this story is full of shit writing. keep crying over my comments if you want but i did not insult anybody except the author’s shit writing.