Last chapter and I still can't decide if I like it or not. It just feels like it's lackin...

akuma_river March 1, 2024 1:46 am

Last chapter and I still can't decide if I like it or not.

It just feels like it's lacking something...more time to flesh it out?

So 2 stars.

Responses
    JustBeingMyself March 1, 2024 2:02 pm

    Same, I can't decide either. It's hard to explain

    akuma_river March 1, 2024 4:15 pm
    Same, I can't decide either. It's hard to explain JustBeingMyself

    Yeah.

    It's an interesting premise. Interesting plot...but it feels cheap.

    Like the author wasn't motivated to tell the story?

    It feels like the story lacks soul.

    I have read more pwp abuse uke stories (the glory hole on Renta, etc) and its better than this...it's just weird.

    I should like it since its in my wheelhouse, but I don't.

    nic_128 March 8, 2024 11:21 pm

    I was thinking the same. The plot was rushing. In Cgapter 4 I got really confused because I thought some infos were missing or the pages were tumbled.
    And also the yakuza guy said that they will see each other again. But when. Isn't it finished?