Same, I feel like they could’ve had him do more than just feeling guilty. Like he could’ve been secretly helping out all the families or just anyone in need. They add a few pointless stuff that could’ve been changed to something more important. I actually would’ve been okay without the smut since the plot was kinda interesting. I kinda just wish they focused on making the seme and uke relationship more emotionally deep! Like obviously they have a bond since the uke knows about a bunch a secrets but could’ve developed more.
Beautifully written!
Most first time works don't even get a greenlight to be more than 5.5 chapters.
Given how popular this one was and how hard the artist busted her balls to get it done we were lucky to get 20 chapters.
This title wasn't even supposed to get as deep as it did in the first place lol
P.S. judging by the WIPs I've seen on the artist's Twitter I'd probably avoid their newer works if I were you. I figure it'd be too spicy for you lol
What are you even talking about?? Me and the op of the comment are discussing the plot of this manga and saying the seme could’ve done more then just feeling guilty. If a plot is good, you don’t need useless smut. Most of the scenes were random and seemed last minute added anyway.
I like the concept, I rlly do and the fact that at the end ml had to just live with the guilt of his past murderes, I just can't say it was what I was looking for at the time of reading. It's very emotional and dives deep into the charecters depth which wasn't what I was really expecting. I feel a bit more could've been added to the plot in place of the filler smut but a generally okay story. Can't say I'd read it again unfortunately