i think this is a failure of storytelling

kickassfu February 23, 2024 10:34 am

like you can get real good fucked up stories, that are enjoyable (i know ppl will moan and yell how writing something fucked up makes a story bad in and of itself which i completely disagree). stories that are either just very interesting looks into the human psyche + lots of good smut. or just even good pwp really.

maybe we just don't know the motivatons yet so it feels thin? but i just don't think it's being written well lol this chapter felt like pwp but then it switched back. like pick a lane dude. idk why i'm even trying to make dissertation outta of this random yaoi manga lol the adhd meds kicked in huh

ignore me guys. hope y'all are enjoying it lol

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