It feels like the author is trying to cram as many typical BL plots into one. It just doesn't seem cohesive to me. And the pacing is non-existent. Now I'm only reading to see how it all ends.
just made a dumbass comment and read this and went like THIS. this is what i was trying to say. but you just said it better and more succint lol thanks
It feels like the author is trying to cram as many typical BL plots into one. It just doesn't seem cohesive to me. And the pacing is non-existent. Now I'm only reading to see how it all ends.