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w take. i think if the end does not involve Dan setting Jaekyung on fire and dancing around his remains this story gonna get a zero stars from me.
Case in point. I dont think it matters how good his redemption arc is executed, readers will continue to villainize him and disregard his good actions, and rightfully so.
Your profile picture and name is awesome by the way. It brings me more joy than JK brings to Dan.
Ok. I know this is a long thread but hear me out.
I enjoyed Mingwa's other work, BJ Alex, but im starting to see a pattern. Toxic seme slowly becoming soft to Uke.
YES. I KNOW it's a common trope in yaois but this one feels like Mingwa is seeing just how far they can go to make the seme as toxic as he can be.
40+ chapters in and there has been little to no progress on the relationship between Dan and JK. Zero signs of redemption.
At this point, many readers (myself included) are starting to get tired of the repetition of abuse by JK (and Dan's stubbornness). So the question now is: Will we be able to move on after his redemption? Or has he already reached the limit of forever being a piece of shit regardless what happens?
If you write a story keep in mind not just how you want to progress the story, but also how the overall audience would want it to progress.