This story is so deeply unserious. It's not a bad concept but it's not executed very well ...

ope1965 February 22, 2024 8:01 pm

This story is so deeply unserious. It's not a bad concept but it's not executed very well so far. It'd need to be SUPER slow burn -- Yuha's dealing with someone who a) isn't gay b) was married to his sister/saw him as literal family and c) is still grieving. It's definitely played off as just being a setup for smut, like they're rushing to get to the seggs, so Yuha is being really creepy and crossing boundaries constantly. Though tbh Hyunseo is deeply in denial and not very self-aware. It's kind of a letdown because it could have been really interesting if done with more care. But I guess it is what it is.

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    Willow March 2, 2024 5:10 am

    Exactly!
    And let me add that it would've been waaayy better if they looked more mature, given the fact that they're both adult men who are in a smutty manhwa

    And while reading your comment I was thinking that it would've been perfect if the author of Miscreants and Mayhem created this plot in their own style

    Honestly, I came to drop this and your comment caught my attention