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My self esteem is so low I can smell the fires of hell.
The problem is not that he's insecure. The problem is also not only the MC. The ML is just as bad, with the only difference that we don't see his internal thoughts.
The problem is that the MC keeps on repeating the same thing and nothing changes about it, because neither of the two take a step in any direction but backwards.
Jesus. Fucking. Christ.
I'm dropping this. This is torture. It's triggering. It's the absolute worst case of failed communication I've ever seen.
They've been literally making NO progress for 30 whole chapters. But there's also nothing else happening. They're just stuck in a constant loop of not talking and the MC just monologuing his insecure pussy thoughts. I don't understand WHY they're even talking to each other. Nothing that's being said has any point other than to plant more dumb shit in MCs head to monolog over.
Who tf notices that the other is making excuses, even goes as far as to POINT IT OUT to them and then NOT ASK why they're making excuses?????
It's so bad I'm convinced both of them are an alien species from another planet because they sure as hell don't act like human beings.