Responses
ok she doesn't feel fake now. Maybe it was because of her awful acting
but like... girl... that can't be called plot armor now would it? it's a plot tank? plot fortress? The whole world basically revolves around her... I mean she IS the MC lol but a bit of screentime and spotlight on the other characters would also be nice?
hmmmn maybe it'll be better? Who knows?
Chap 8 as of now
Just my thoughts and opinions while reading. No biggie. Yes, you can disagree with me but please don't be too mean thank you
The way MC acts... seems a bit... forced and not genuine? idk but there's this sense of incongruence between her actions and words...
If you've ever read transmigration works you've probably ran across an MC where their real personality doesn't mesh with the original body's personality so they have to act. But there's always this feeling of divide between what they say and do to what they actually mean? and want? Like idk maybe I'm just too sensitive?