Funny, great art, but the plot definitely became a bit half assed

Sept_san002 February 18, 2024 6:56 pm

I enjoyed it but I think the story couldve been fleshed out more? I'm still unsure why Kylot was using Rabby from the beginning? I get he wanted to fuck over his family but I still don't understand why and I still don't understand why he needed Rabby to be apart of that??

For yall saying (incest with the "alien Kylot thing" he's not their son he's an alien that needed Rabby's body heat to be born NOT his actual son ngl I wasn't pleased they left him in the story)

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    Eparthenoi February 25, 2024 4:41 pm

    I agree that it definately could've been more flesh out, and I could see this story definately working out to be 60+ chapters with world building and character motives and whatnot, but I'm not sure Kylot was using Rabby since the very beginning. I think it's more that Kylot took a passing fancy to Rabby, since Rabby was extremely adamant about not leaving the dude alone, which was something that Kylot doesn't appear used to

    Sept_san002 February 25, 2024 5:15 pm
    I agree that it definately could've been more flesh out, and I could see this story definately working out to be 60+ chapters with world building and character motives and whatnot, but I'm not sure Kylot was us... Eparthenoi

    Yeah I definitely agree with you there! I think they were trying to make a connection at some point with Kylot using Rabby from early on and that's what I wad getting at. I'm just still unsure why exactly that was.

    SpoonFlakes March 28, 2024 2:32 pm

    I've been calling it Plantcest, lmao