I really like the dynamics between the two but all the "pheromone this pheromon that" expl...

Edea February 18, 2024 11:16 am

I really like the dynamics between the two but all the "pheromone this pheromon that" explanations make it seem like this story is written by an amateur who tries to act like a big shot. Good writers show, don't tell. This is a trademark of unskillful writing. We have such a green flag seme and a cute, funny uke. This story has a great potential of a fun ride. I hope the author improves themselves in the near future.

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    Ah.. Shimatta February 18, 2024 1:50 pm

    take your own advice, you yap a lot for no good reason

    Edea February 18, 2024 2:19 pm
    take your own advice, you yap a lot for no good reason Ah.. Shimatta

    That's called constructive criticism. I didn't insult or anything. Why are you so butthurt?

    eumesmoporra February 20, 2024 5:12 am

    sometimes I actually appreciate all this explaning in omegaverse because not every reader is well versed in how these things work out in these abo realities PLUS it even differs from manhwa to manhwa