Firstly the story telling is so unorganized and there really is no way to tell the timeframe of things.
Secondly, the story telling was absolutely asssssssssssssss!! The premise and plot of the story was really great but i couldn't tell what TF was happening for half of it because the story was conveyed terribly. The whole explanation about the dragons and how their shit systems work is so odd. Even with the whole thing of Sigmund growing was terribly explained, cause how did bro just go from a child who didn't know anything to fucking knowing everything.
Third, this was absolutely rushed. major important plot events are missing from the story and events that did happen did not given enough of a impact to make it feel important. like where was the grand duke exam? When she unlocked her power so that Sigmund could've grown why did that shit feel so lack luster and it still wasn't explained why or how that happened. plus, the daughter or the last duke was hiding their identity as a woman it got fucking recoil when i saw her just popped up presenting as a woman and hear that she got married to the baron and even has a child. That was just so out of place for me.
Lastly, WE DID NOT EVEN GET A LIKKLE WEDDING SCENE!! I was looking forward to it and having jensen walk her down the isle （/TДT)/
I'm disappointed because this could've been a really good story. it had great world building but the execution and explanation of it was done poorly.
This was so odd.
Firstly the story telling is so unorganized and there really is no way to tell the timeframe of things.
Secondly, the story telling was absolutely asssssssssssssss!! The premise and plot of the story was really great but i couldn't tell what TF was happening for half of it because the story was conveyed terribly. The whole explanation about the dragons and how their shit systems work is so odd. Even with the whole thing of Sigmund growing was terribly explained, cause how did bro just go from a child who didn't know anything to fucking knowing everything.
Third, this was absolutely rushed. major important plot events are missing from the story and events that did happen did not given enough of a impact to make it feel important. like where was the grand duke exam? When she unlocked her power so that Sigmund could've grown why did that shit feel so lack luster and it still wasn't explained why or how that happened. plus, the daughter or the last duke was hiding their identity as a woman it got fucking recoil when i saw her just popped up presenting as a woman and hear that she got married to the baron and even has a child. That was just so out of place for me.
Lastly, WE DID NOT EVEN GET A LIKKLE WEDDING SCENE!! I was looking forward to it and having jensen walk her down the isle （/TДT)/
I'm disappointed because this could've been a really good story. it had great world building but the execution and explanation of it was done poorly.