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I totally agree! I think the translator mentioned the author changed the story progression because she was afraid the yuri fantasy niche would be too overwhelming for newcomers to either genre, but the limitations set allowed her to explore her world in a more concise manner.
So I've read the original twitter version, as well as the serialized version and I just gotta say. (although it could still enter a similar route as the og version was much further along) The writing and story is a loooooot different than the og version. There's still a lot fundementally the same, but the plot seems drastically changed, and the writing flow seems a lot more.... Natural? The og had a lot of stuff going for it, but it all felt a little too on the nose with some stuff. Even if it's a slow burn, I feel like this version has a better flow of the story