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I think it’s quite confusing to read because the art wasn’t made to be in a webtoon format, and was originally in a manga format. Our eyes are confused on what to focus on, when in manga we can better see the entire picture in the context of other drawings. I’m probably explaining this confusingly, but I’m just saying it would be easier to understand what’s going on if it was in its original form. I really hate how the publishers cut the panels and upload them in webtoon format because they want to squeeze more money out of the readers.
I absolutely love this mangas storyline, and the art is absolutely GORGEOUS but one singular thing has me realizing. There are some very good examples of what I'm talking about in episode 20.
Most of the manga is great, no complaints here, but as soon as the characters start getting intimate, not only do a ridiculous amount of unnecessary sound effects appear, but we get zoomed way in and usually on really random, seemingly unnecessary at times, places. More than once did I have literally no idea what they were doing. I still have no idea if they had sex or not. At one point I was pretty sure elf dude blew human dude, but then human dude ran away implying he hasn't been touched. Perhaps if the scenes weren't heavily censored with the dreaded lightsabers as well, I would have been able to piece through the 47 "Ah"s and figured out "-who's- what's that -Pokemon- body part!" well enough to decipher who was doing what to who for how much. As is, I'm just absolutely lost. It's sad too, I loved the story and concept quite a lot.
My only other complaint is the pacing.