Ch 19

Turnip February 16, 2024 7:13 am

Idk if I'm going to finish this one . . .
Personally, the writing feels kind of juvenile - The characters don't really have distinct or interesting personalities and behave kind of childishly. The "drama" feels very low-stakes (so I'm not exactly itching to see how it resolves) but over dramatized and not in a fun way but in like a gloomy way. There's nothing really compelling about them or their romance so far that makes me want to root for them or finish reading their story to see how it ends. And a lot of the plot points seem kind of pointless, nonsensical, or just kind of unrelatable.

These are just my opinions of course, and I was wondering if anyone has other thoughts or is seeing something in this comic that I'm just missing.
It's probably just not my cup of tea but I'd still like to know what others think

Responses
    PaaandaBeaaar June 15, 2024 12:35 am

    I def agree. I just got.. bored. Nothing happened, nothing was crazy. It was just boring. The art is cute, the story had some potential, but everything was resolved easily. It’s a healthy relationship and yes, we love those, but if nothing crazy happens, then what makes the fiction fun?

    We read fiction for the reality we’d never get to experience. This seems easily experienced and just like every day like. And yes, we like that! But not when we’re looking for a story with plot twists and drama. Good for the couple, glad this one is well-liked. I just didn’t feel any real character development. Well. Issac cried more and more… puppy semes are cute, but he was just childish.

    PaaandaBeaaar June 15, 2024 12:36 am

    I def agree. I just got.. bored. Nothing happened, nothing was crazy. It was just boring. The art is cute, the story had some potential, but everything was resolved easily. It’s a healthy relationship and yes, we love those, but if nothing crazy happens, then what makes the fiction fun?

    We read fiction for the reality we’d never get to experience. This seems easily experienced and just like every day life. And yes, we like that! But not when we’re looking for a story with plot twists and drama. Good for the couple, glad this one is well-liked. I just didn’t feel any real character development. Well. Issac cried more and more… puppy semes are cute, but he was just childish.