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Yeah, I get what you mean. There was a major conflict but the resolution was too quick and easy. It's to a point where I wonder, "was there a point to bringing it up as a source of contention in the first place?" I was hoping the not speaking your mind, not considering the other person's feelings and future life goals would be better explored to justify the (VERY brief moment of) angst. Alas, they all got swept away as quickly as they appeared.
It’s good, but there isn’t really a major conflict resolution. I feel like it would’ve really benefited from something to add a little bit more depth and development for both characters, cause by the end I just found myself a little bored and surprised that was all. Of course, there isn’t anything wrong with it per se, I just think it could use something to make the plot a little more interesting.