The End???

Hokipoki February 14, 2024 11:41 pm

So they just killed the evil kid and called it good? That seems too rushed. What about his back story? Like was he even a kid, how did he get those magical powers?
Also what about the whole tension with the royal family???? Like it totally just glossed over how they’re on the break of fighting with them?? To manny unanswered questions, more like the break of a season then the actual ending.
Also the whole her going back in time and all the struggles her son had were too glossed over. Also what about the development of her and the kids powers? The daughter barely had any spotlight?

Responses
    Harumaki February 15, 2024 12:52 am

    Yees! This story was never that good, but it was coherent in the beginning, fun to read. In the end, they rushed so much that seems incomplete. I didn't even understood the plot with the evil kid really and he was already dead.