4. Skiped to chapter 71, damn the art. Went from a 9/10 art to a 4/10 art. Effort was there but damn....
5. Jesus, the Duke went from not caring about her to getting angry at everyone( Knights, maids, teacher) because they lost her in what...? 2 chapters....??? .........?????????????????? 2 chapters for him to develop some deep rooted fatherly love??????????
6. The 1st brother as well....??? So they just magically love the MC after spending 1 chapter together.....?
At least with the Serena maid, you can see the development from strangers to family. From telling Serena that Serena reminds her of the marshmallow(I wanna talk about the marshmellow but later) to telling Serena that the Duke is too old and they Serena is precious. Albeit it's fast, at least it spans out on 10+ chapters.
7. The marshmallow dialogue is so weird. Every dialogue is weird. Even the dialogue yo the shinshu building is weird. Wdym a marshmallow is soft and makes you feel tingly inside? Are you eating some ganja infused marshmallow to feel tingly????
So, to which ever tiktok account that suggested this manhwa and put the overall rating as 7/10................
Wadahell. Initially I thought It'd be interesting to reason a baby manhwa with the baby ACTUALLY be a baby.
But I quickly find out she's....a literal baby. Not an 8 year old, but a literal damn baby I really got what I asked for but damn. Maybe it's the way they wrote her or the babies in general, I have a pair of niece and nephews, both 5 and 7 respectively and they dont cry the as much as she did.
I've read until chapter 32. I took a sneak read at chapter 71 so this is what I have to say:
1. What the hell is wrong with the pacing? Chapter 71 is so close to the final chapter but she's still a child, crying like a child, acting like a child, holding a damn bear like a baby. She didn't even know who she was fighting??? It was literally revealed at this chapter. Even though the enemies has literally been mention since like what? The first few chapters???? When she first started having her lessons???? But only at CHAPTER 71, she found out about them? 27 CHAPTERS BEFORE THE FINALE??????
2. AND ONLY AT THIS CHAPTER??? SHE FINALLY HAS A 2ND BROTHER??? HELLLLOOOO???? AGAIN, 27 CHAPTERS BEFORE THE FINALE????????
3. Hated the eyes. Hated that she cries at 97% of the chapters. Even at chapter 71 she's still crying. Hated her naiveness. Hated how "optimistic" she is.