bro the battle tho

noctivagus February 13, 2024 5:06 am

Had a gang turf battle, lasted two seconds, involved like four people— like girl what I was expecting something drawn out and exciting. Guess I was giving this story too much credit.

Also still can’t get over the fact his name is fucking risky.

This plot yall…

Responses
    Meruemshu February 13, 2024 4:11 pm

    It didn't last 2 seconds dumbass, it's just that the author isn't dragging it unnecessarily for 3 chapters.

    noctivagus February 14, 2024 7:38 am

    I mean sure, but still. It feels extremely rushed to a point where it feels less like an actual coherent plot and more like some fourteen-year-old’s Wattpad story. Some things should be drawn out rather than just throwing everything into one chapter. Especially for a pivotal point like this, where we not only see the MC get more involved in the gang, but we also get to learn more about his past through the other guy. (Who im guessing is going to die) It’s just poor writing and planning.